Monday, 19 December 2011

Well this was interesting to be short about it

Here is the proposed ending of my Pandora Blade story. Of course nothing is finalized. But it was odd that the ending seemed so clear to me. Like it was always going to happen this way. None of the decisions made by any characters represent real life feelings(just sayin).

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Tania awoke with a start. There was a face above her and she unthinkingly snapped the Pandora Blade up at it. If she aimed just below it then she could cut the artery, to cut the entire head off was a waste of energy. Only three months with this blade and I’ve already learned that it’s wasteful to cut off the head, I’m slashing at heads that appear in the dark. There was a clang and a flash of light. Tania instantly relaxed as she saw the light. She knew it was Jordan now, trust him to try and scare her like that. Jordan smiled and said, “Morning Beautiful.” Tania smiled back. “Didn’t I tell you to stop calling me that?” He shrugged as he said, “Maybe. Am I not allowed to remark on a beautiful woman?” She groaned, “Get a girlfriend Jordan.” “It’s not through lack of trying Tania.” He took his blade from hers and it melted into his arm. As he turned the tattoo was there shining on his back. She traced a finger over the lines through his shirt. “Does it always glow when you do that?” He turned around and frowned at it. “Not normally, but nothing seems to be wrong so I’ll run with it.”

He sat down on the bed next to her. “Out of all the places I thought I’d go in three months I didn’t think it would be your bedroom at three in the morning.” She hit him in the chest and he laughed. “Sorry, I couldn’t help myself. But still it’s hard to believe that we’ve adapted to this life so easily. I mean three months ago how would you have reacted if I’d showed up in your bedroom at this time of night?” She brought her knees up to her chest and wrapped her arms around it the sword now pointing at the ceiling. “I don’t know. It’s like these months have been years, I’m so far from the person I was back then It’s like their a stranger.” He looked her straight in the eyes. “You’re still Tania, nothing can change that, not the blade, not what we’ve been through.” He looked haunting in the moonlight, like half of his face was completely missing. She was tempted for a moment to reach out and see if his face really was there. “But I’m slowly changing what it means to be me. Jordan for all your honeyed words I’m still not the same person I was back then.” Jordan slowly placed a hand on hers, the one holding the Pandora Blade. With slow and deliberate movements he unwound each individual finger from the grip. “So what if you could take it all back, what if you could become what you were back then?” She looked at him then her fingers involuntarily tightened on the sword. He looked at that and said softly. “Can you answer without holding onto the sword? I want the answer from you, not you and it.”

She slowly let it go and Jordan stood back. She clenched her now empty fist. It seemed wrong to be without the sword, it had become part of her. But she’d never needed it before. “I don’t know Jordan. The choice would have to be right in front of me.” Flipping the Pandora blade so it was held out handle first he said, “Well now it is.” She looked at him, “You’re saying that you can undo what we did? But that’s impossible, not even…” “Tania, I can undo what the sword did to you, not what we did. We will always have saved the world. I’m just asking you if you want to keep doing it.” She smiled at him and reached for the sword, “It was a pretty good feeling.” He jerked the sword back. “I’m asking you to think for yourself Tania. For once don’t be privy to the feelings that thing invokes in you.” She snatched the blade and swung at his head. He swayed backwards but the blade still sliced a line on one side of his face. The Eon Blade seemed to move of its own accord and slapped the Pandora Blade out of Tania’s hand. Suddenly his face was next to hers, “Do you understand why I can’t let you keep the blade now?” The blood dripping down his face seemed to glow in the moonlight. “Not everyone’s as fast as me and it won’t always be me you’re threatening. We both got told if we took up these blades we’d lose something.” Tania looked at the blood as it fell from his face like a teardrop. She sobbed once and said, “I never thought the price would be me.” He wrapped his arms around her and she cried into his shoulder for a moment. After a minute she looked up and smiled. He smiled back, “Get dressed, we’ve got to go to the Heaven Gate.”

He stood outside as she changed from her Pyjamas into Day clothes. He rooted through his pockets and found three metal objects. One was his coin, the doubled tailed silver dollar. He’d scratched a heart on one side a long time ago. It had ruined the value of the coin but he didn’t care about that. Everyone knew he had a double tailed coin but nobody knew about the heart. You’re such a hopeless romantic Jordan. The second item was a real coin. There was once a time when Jordan would have been happy to find two dollars in his pants, but now he just put the coin back in his pocket. The last was a small sword. It was a key ring. Or at least that’s what people thought. He tossed it into the air and it grew into a hollow sword. Evangileon, the sword of the Primarch. He slid the Eon Blade into the middle then the Pandora blade. Evangileon flashed as the Pandora Blade slid into place. He held just above his back and it turned into a gold mist. It flowed into his back and slowly became the Tattoo that usually held the Eon Blade. He sighed and pulled out the other coin. Heads I do, Tails I don’t. The coin spiralled high into the air as Jordan flicked it. But before he could catch it a hand shot out and grabbed it. He turned and saw Tania’s smiling face. “What’s the coin toss for?” He just shrugged and said, “Is it heads?” She looked at him in a condescending way. “Maybe if you hadn’t used the double tails coin so much I’d actually check.” He pointed at her clenched fist. “Real coin, and this time it really is chance.” She opened her fist and the Queens head glared up at both of them. Tania flicked the coin up and Jordan caught it out of reflex. “Wow, honesty for once, anyway we have to get going right?” Jordan didn’t reply but simply turned towards the door.

They both walked up the familiar path to the Heaven Gate. But when Tania rounded the Corner after Jordan she saw something she was not expecting. The Heaven Gate was open. “Jordan, shouldn’t you have shut that?” He turned around and she saw a sad smile spread across his face. “I opened it. And this Tania is where we say goodbye.” Tania dropped into a ready stance and tried to summon the Pandora Blade. “No, no that’s not what I meant.” Jordan covered his eyes with his hand. “Will you give me the benefit of the doubt before you try and kill me?” She stood out of the ready stance but still looked suspicious. “The gates are shut by the blades but the connection is held in place by them as well. As long as the blades exist in this world then we will have to fight. I can shut the door and keep those bastards out forever. We have to get rid of the sword from this place. And I have to go with them.” Tania’s mouth dropped. “What? Why, just throw the blades through.” Jordan shook his head and held out his hand. Evangileon dropped into it from nowhere. “Evangileon can cut through the dimensions regardless of whether or not a connection exists. I have to keep it out of the wrong hands.” Tania walked up and tried to take Evangileon. “I can’t let you do that Jordan. What about your friends and family, what about us?” Jordan became angry. “What about the people who will die if I don’t? Will you doom them to death so you can keep a friend in your life?!” She stopped, and stared off the side of the hill. “You’re the only other person who knows what it feels like to wield one of those blades. What they can do to you. Please don’t leave me alone with that.” Jordan stepped forward but stopped as Tania held up a hand. “Please Tania, I have to do this.” The turn was explosive and so was the reply. “No Jordan you don’t have to do this, you want to. The Eon blade has stirred up some wild desire for you to go around sacrificing yourself for others and you’re only too happy to oblige. The world has managed fine with these blades in it until now, why can’t it continue to have them!”

Jordan looked down at the sword grasped in his hands. It felt right, powerful he’d never felt this good. And yet something was still eating away at him. He stuck the sword in the ground and went over to beside Tania. “I want to leave because of you. I’ll never be happy with just friends and I thought that after all that we did then you might feel differently. But you don’t do you?” She looked at him, “You can’t leave because of me, can you?” Jordan ran a hand through his hair. “Tania it kills me to be with you knowing that I will never be able to be loved the way I love you. I can deal with it for a time and maybe I’ll get over it someday. But I’d rather not take the chance. At least I’ll be happy with the memories I do have.” Tania’s eye widened, “But, you’re still a teenager, you’ll get over me.” He smiled at her. “The Eon blade, it makes you believe that your love is righteous and pure and everything like that. And I’ve looked though the records, nobody ever gets over it.” He turned and picked up Evangileon. “I’m sorry you had to know. I…” His voice failed him and he kept walking.

“Jordan, please don’t go. I love you.” She hated herself as she said the words. She knew it wasn’t true and he would to. He stabbed the ground back into the ground and walked back over to her. He looked her right in the eye, his face an inch from hers. He kissed her lightly, only for an instant. “No you don’t.” He whispered. He turned back to the gate and started walking, he snatched up the sword as he went. He climbed the steps to the gate and hoisted the sword onto his shoulder. He was going to walk through but something stopped him. He turned back and pulled something out of his pocket. He rubbed it once and tossed it into the air. It glinted in the sun and Tania caught it easily. She opened her cupped hands and saw the eagle that was on Jordan’s Double Tails coin. “Careful with that he called.” She put the coin into her pocket still numb that he was really doing this. As he stepped through the gate he called back over his shoulder, “Catcha later Beautiful.” She opened her mouth to tell him to stop flirting but the gate snapped shut before she could say anything. She walked to the pedestal that opened the gate and slapped a hand on it. Nothing happened. She slapped a few more times. “He wasn’t kidding.” She looked at the hulking structure of the Heaven Gate and she sighed. “Why’d you have to go and be a hero?”
She sat down at the top of the gate and leaned against it. It was cool on the back of her head. She pulled out the coin. There was the Eagle polished to a shiny finish. She flipped it over and did a double take. There was a crude heart carved into the finish of the coin. She flipped it and it landed heart side up. She laughed softly to herself as she stood. Even when he was another dimension away he was still trying to flirt with her. She walked down the track away from the Heaven Gate and groaned, “How am I going to explain this to everyone?”

Jordan heard the Gate snap shut and turned to face what was ahead of him. Heaven was flat at the moment. Like a desert except with firm footing. He stepped forward into the unknown. Evangileon once again melted into the tattoo on his back. He smiled to himself as a howl split the air. A few seconds later three Heaven Hounds burst out of the ground towards him. His feet blurred as he spun to the right and the hounds jumped past. They turned and leapt again and this time he summoned Evangileon. It cut through the hounds and they crashed into the ground behind him. From that moment on he knew that he’d be a man of the sword for the rest of his days. But he was fine with that. Because he was dam good with a sword. 

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Of course some of this might not make sense because your not me and don't understand some of the mechanics of the world that they live in. For instance why Tania was reassured by a flash of light. This is because the Eon Blade and Pandora Blade flash with energy every time they touch. And other stuff like that which I am to lazy to explain right now. 

I was surprised at how much I managed to write. And it will probably get longer knowing me. 

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